pourriez vous me corriger cette lettre d'anglais. C'est une lettre de motivation pour un stage dans un studio de film (c'est un devoir en anglais, c'est pas la

pourriez vous me corriger cette lettre d'anglais. C'est une lettre de motivation pour un stage dans un studio de film (c'est un devoir en anglais, c'est pas la réalité ;) )  
Firstly, I'm very interested about your work placemet and I would like to work whith you. In fact, Since I was little, I wish work in a film studio. Indeed, I'm good at inventing scenarios, creating original characters and working in team but I also very good at cumputing. For exemple, I can copy a DVD or  download an Mp3 file. I've also already created a blog where I put there all my créations (films...). So, il you are interested about my blog, you can go to Jfilm@blog.com and discover my passion.
Then, with you, I wanted to uncover new things that I don't yet and I hope that you will teach me more about movies and animation technology.
Finally, you saw whith this latter that cinema is my passion. So, I think that I am the teenagers that you need.                                      
                                                       yours faithfully
                                                                    Lore